Monarch
These
lift me through the airy height
These
wings acquired through a night
Into
a foreign world above
Of
light and warmth and truth and love
What
seems a dream are days gone by
When
I knew nothing of the sky
Just
toil on an earthly bed
And
thoughts of milkweed in my head
But
then I there within a husk
That
dangled from an Aspen tusk
Began
to form a different bent
That
I knew not was Heaven meant
And
now I’m lifted through this air
And
though attaining beauty fair
The
only thing that moves me now
Is
that I share this flight somehow
-jwm
Of
the Poem
I
think it was in 2008, but I was asleep one afternoon when in my dream these
words- in both rhyme and meter- came to me: "But then I there within a
husk / That dangled from an Aspen tusk". I woke up, I wrote them down, and
for the next several weeks tried to give context to them in this poem above.
I chose the simple rhyme scheme of aabb based on the scheme given me in the dream, and adhered to iambic tetrameter as the guiding meter for the same reason.
The works of Emanuel Swedenborg heavily influenced the content and message of the poem, as did the idea of redemption.
I hope you guys enjoyed it.
I chose the simple rhyme scheme of aabb based on the scheme given me in the dream, and adhered to iambic tetrameter as the guiding meter for the same reason.
The works of Emanuel Swedenborg heavily influenced the content and message of the poem, as did the idea of redemption.
I hope you guys enjoyed it.
1 comment:
Your words have such a strong power and meaning in them. The lines are so inspiring and touchy that I feel like floating while reading.
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