tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post6921723690388348056..comments2024-02-13T07:05:32.433-07:00Comments on Of Poetry: Love UnrequitedJohn W. Mayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10462966253651386355noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post-62691430000003076182010-11-15T15:16:48.227-07:002010-11-15T15:16:48.227-07:00I feel that sinking feeling in my stomach... the s...I feel that sinking feeling in my stomach... the same one you might have felt as you wrote it. Powerful. Thank you for sharing.Kendra Lisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10324703182589692806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post-46577241167016847512010-11-14T19:13:28.601-07:002010-11-14T19:13:28.601-07:00thank her, the night that makes you pine –
who ma...thank her, the night that makes you pine – <br />who makes you ache to know her love!<br />ne’er in vain do poets’ hearts incline <br />when even pain brings forth a dove!Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09569918774646206711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post-19959269718952035642010-11-08T20:35:00.205-07:002010-11-08T20:35:00.205-07:00You've outdid yourself J-Dub. I feel as though...You've outdid yourself J-Dub. I feel as though I've been slacking with my pieces but you DEF smack the ish out me with this one! DEF one of my favs by you....From start to finish, this piece is on point lol...(Exits this screen to begin to write myself)I AMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06893462247912717749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post-13784670171290454652010-11-02T09:00:02.932-06:002010-11-02T09:00:02.932-06:00It's wonderful.It's wonderful.Michael Unbreakablehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12505021222491257082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post-1246224033101083432010-11-02T02:00:18.535-06:002010-11-02T02:00:18.535-06:00Wonderfully written. Powerful, and yet still tame...Wonderfully written. Powerful, and yet still tame. As if a wounded warrior who is victorious in war, but defeated in love.SoThenItwashttp://sothenitwas.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post-1809058729229091292010-11-01T19:28:57.621-06:002010-11-01T19:28:57.621-06:00I'm sad to think that this passionate renderin...I'm sad to think that this passionate rendering may be the result of a personal experience. My heart breaks for your heart. I know exactly how you feel.<br /><br />~ shevaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post-77398595537883842982010-11-01T16:36:00.787-06:002010-11-01T16:36:00.787-06:00Very beautifully put. Unrequited love's a bitc...Very beautifully put. Unrequited love's a bitch. <br /><br /><br />www.preciousrarity.blogspot.comLivabughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02062230527490694856noreply@blogger.com