tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post5131731426140189056..comments2024-02-13T07:05:32.433-07:00Comments on Of Poetry: perditionJohn W. Mayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10462966253651386355noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post-54690648332693672272009-10-24T07:19:53.278-06:002009-10-24T07:19:53.278-06:00If you have a bunch of suds and take away all but ...If you have a bunch of suds and take away all but one, what do you have? A sud? ....... A bubble!<br /><br />What is the past tense of doomed? I am doomed.... Then when the doom arrives, am I "dumb?" "doometh?" "in doom?"<br /><br />"Uh, not in this poem." -- I LOVE it! I am so glad you are okay with it!!! Though I must admit I did furrow my brow in puzzlement when I came across that word.... typo for "grew" ???? Hmmmmmm. Though I also did pass it off as a lack of understanding on my part, not an error on yours. PLEASE continue to take such delightful, creative, and original risks. Your poetry is fresh and distinctive. I am forever your loyal fan.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2120442619950502271.post-32317974957820106682009-10-19T18:56:28.620-06:002009-10-19T18:56:28.620-06:00To glowed or not to glowed, that's the questio...To glowed or not to glowed, that's the question ... <br /><br />Past tense for blow: blew. Past tense for glow: glowed. Uh, not in this poem. I intentionally selected ‘glew’ in line eight. And I’m entirely okay with it.John W. Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10462966253651386355noreply@blogger.com